1. 13-12-2007 23:45

Very nice!

Mark, it is a very nice poem! Many people could relate to your feelings. Sometimes it is good to put a happy face & keeping positive despite the pain inside but it is very important to express the pain appropriately as what you did. Don't wait for love to descend...give it freely without expectations!! We cannot depend on others to make us happy...we are the ones in control of our own emotions.Cheer up! It is a wonderful world!!

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2. 23-12-2007 08:49

Very nice!

I agree on whatever in the poem you wrote.Some days are good and there is also bad days.What we need is balance.When we feel down all around us is obscure.We need to know the secret in life.How to filled up our emptiness.That is so simple just accept Jesus as your lord and savior because He is the way the truth and the life.Believe me one day you will wake up full of life and everything surrounds you is so bright. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year Raquel 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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3. 23-05-2008 15:11

poems

Inday Jocel 
 
mas nami ja akon...basaha bala hehe! 
 
#1 
LIFE 
Life is a race to win 
Overcoming fears and doubts 
is the greatest challenge 
Face the reality and master 
your emotion. 
 
You will be judge by what 
you have done 
Love yourself and share your 
blessings with 
someone. 
 
Through different circumstances 
we are facing 
In God we are often cling 
He takes away the pain that 
life has bring 
Ang even stops tears from 
falling. 
 
(nami noh?ja ko lng e gnbutang s comment ky dko kmaan kun din isend...duro p ja dad. ang hurubaton ko s hurubaton comment man nakn gnsend pcnsya lng)

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4. 23-05-2008 15:26

poem

Inday Jocel 
basahon nyo ha?pls? 
 
#2 
A NIGHT TRIP HOME 
 
My seatmates were asleep 
I stay awake and listen to 
the bus roaring engine. 
I looked outside the window 
Count every light of every 
lamp post 
I wish home were just a 
meters away 
I can't sleep that night 
I can't wait for the light 
The darkness of the night 
And the breeze of the wind 
touches my heart. 
Then I came to realize 
There's no precious in this 
world like...home! 
 
sori, frustrated poet lang ako...that's y bsan din ko lng submit poems ko...null

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5. 23-05-2008 15:34

poem

Inday Joce Balbuena (SAC Allumna) 
post ko lang real name ko basi my mkabasa nga klasmit ko...KATO 
 
#3 
JUST A WISH 
 
A man worth his 
principle 
He believe what he 
think is right 
Life is always letting 
go 
Sometimes it hurts 
so bad. 
 
Good times are hard 
to come by 
The feeling of emptiness 
And a heart filled with 
sadness 
Happiness is just a wish... 
 
nami man?

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