pamangkutanun

ginsugo mo ako

nga magsag-ub sa bubon

kang kamatuuran...

ugaring ang tubig

nga akun dara

lubug pa sa pagtukun ko

nga paminsarun...

ginbutangan mo kang saraan

ang banga kang kabuhi

agud akun mainum

ang sabat kang akun

mga pamangkutanun...

by:zeanra7

	1. 24-07-2007 06:40
	correction.. sorry, sala nga pag type kg letters. its "lagtukun" NOT "pagtukun". salamat gid! Guest Report

zeanra7

	2. 24-07-2007 17:36
	correction.. Dalum gawa ang ginahalinan nga bubon ka mga hambal mo ba sis. Nice!!! Guest Report

asuwang89

	3. 24-07-2007 18:11
	correction.. Nice work, Ling. Bilib gid ko kanimo. wara ga lubad ang imo abilidad kag talento. padayuna. Kabay nga may enough time ako to share some lines with you. take care. neneng Guest Report

rosegem

	4. 25-07-2007 15:59
	correction.. nami ling, poet kaw gali. interesting. sigeha pa gid himu para may basahun kami ja. Guest Report

vicpjr

	5. 26-07-2007 09:28
	correction.. keep on posting... Guest Report

psyche

	6. 26-07-2007 15:25
	correction.. Not even Shakespear, have the KNOWLEDGE like yours when it comes to poetry ang galing nang dating ah...lucky you nga may nagsara karang lagtok sa imong animo..it is with in you.. your common sense is uncomparable,....   keep it up babes..post more... Guest Report

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